Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Today, we reviewed essay writing. I have pasted the notes below:


·         Essay questions consist of topic words (like “adversity”, or “hardship”) which you must address in the paper
·         You are also expected to tell us the author’s opinion about the topic – NOT yours
·         The first step is to identify the key words
·         The 2nd step is to chart the story in relation to the topics given
·         3rd step is to look at the question again and see if it is answerable (answer it writing a thesis statement: Start with “sometimes” but then cross it out).
·         Using the chart, plan out the order of your body paragraphs (label them) keeping in mind that you can move them later to be sequential




·         For your title, use the key words in the essay question

·         Make sure your title is bolded and centred with all words over three letters capitalized (as well as the first word)

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·         If typing, italicize major works (novels, textbooks, movies, plays, Shakespeare)

·         If writing by hand, underline major works
·         Make sure your title is in the same font as your paper (12 point, Times New Roman)
·         Don’t underline ANYTHING ON YOUR PAPER IF YOU ARE TYPING!!!!!
·         Double space your whole essay with no extra padding around paragraphs or titles
·         Indent new paragraphs


Introductory Paragraph

Sentence One: Attention getter about TOPIC. (anecdote, quote explained, opinion you plan to challenge, little known striking fact, general statement about human nature, definition)
Sentence Two: Attention getter continued (explain connection to topic)




Everyone in this world has connected with others at one point or another. Obviously, the fact that we are here means we were connected to another through the ambilical cord.

Sentence Three: Introduce the text (genre, author, title, overview of the work as a whole).

In the allegorical novel, Animal Farm, by George Orwell, we are introduced to animals attempting to successfully run a farm without human involvement.

Sentence four, five and six: Summary of the text as it will relate to supporting your thesis.

Sentence four: Two boys attempt to take on the leadership role but the one who does has the majority of support.

Sentence five: The boys on the island all long for safety and security due to their young ages and inability to lead themselves.

Sentence six: One boy in particular has the knowledge to help the others, but isn’t always respected for this due to his disabilities; in the end, this leads to a catastrophic outcome.

Sentence seven: Thesis (an arguable opinion about the topic). You could also include the main points here if you want.

Through the boys’ experiences, we can ascertain that personal connections are very important.





Everyone in this world has connected with others at one point or another. Obviously, the fact that we are here means we were connected to another through the umbilical cord. In the allegorical novel, Lord of the Flies, by George Orwell, we are introduced to a group of boys attempting to successfully survive without adults on an isolated island. Two boys attempt to take on the leadership role but the one who does has the majority of support. The boys on the island all long for safety and security due to their young ages and inability to lead themselves without adults to ensure the rules are being followed. One boy in particular has the knowledge to help the others, but isn’t always respected for this due to his disabilities; in the end, this leads to a catastrophic outcome. Through the boys’ experiences, we can ascertain that personal connections are very important to our survival.
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